Date: Sun, 19 May 2013 02:46:50 +0200
· Include fieldwork in the paper(paragraph talking about how computers have made it harder for government to control information.)
· Rework on introduction sentence. Make sure I include how the government punishes people.
· Define CCTV, what it is and how its controlled by the government.
· Change the title.
· Take about the steps the government has taken to change the rules.